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RE: 30DAYS Music Challenge day 29: It his love, Whitesnake

in #music7 years ago

You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

In fact I love the oldend, darker voice better then in the beginning of Whitesnake.
It should be better than instead of better then.

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Lol got called out 😂 i often make errors

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