This is so epically Awesome I'm almost lost for words....but I'll have a stab at in anyway! So you stopped listening to music when I started! Given we have already found out I can't even manage to sing along to music very well, I was interested to see how you went along with rap.
Honestly though, this is fantastic - very good choice of backing track and the vocals roll over smoothly. I loved reading through the words while listening to the track as well - it's actually a really good set of lyrics credit to both you and @brisby for making it work so well.
Now that is a fun trivia fact LOLLL
I think I'm still in need of a lot of practice to make it sound more Rappy LOLLLLLLLLLL
But I'm having a ton of fun in the trying :D I'm so happy you liked it :D