Like A Feather Lost In A Mud
Inside my deepest fears the shine will fade away...
Like a feather lost in a mud I will crawl away.
My tormented skin will...
Ok, this sounds too dark. Not in a mood for that right now! You see being "cursi" (cheesy) is not my thing! When I write or talk I go straight to the point, I don't play being cute cause I'm not and hell no, I don't like to be cute either! Just because I can't go straight to the point when writing poetry I use lots of metaphors and symbols to express my feelings or ideas.
My poetry is raw, strong, a bit dark and cold but filled with emotions. Not everyone understands it and think I live in a forever depression because people takes every word literally instead of seeing the whole picture and truly understand what's written. I do it because is always a nice surprise when people actually take the time to see beyond the words and grasp the message of what's written.
I like to call it "raw slapping poetry". Sometimes I get funny and write crazy funny poetry because, why not? Don't expect lovely cuteness from me, that's not my style!
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I LOVE your poetry!! If I don't need to read it several times to get it, it is too light! ;) Never change!!
People think mine are a tad dirty. LOL They aren't, just suggestive. Totally different and most don't get them anyway. ;)
That is okay too. Everyone thinks I am a lonely person looking for a man. Sigh No winning.. :)
Ahahaha your poetry is full of passion! Is a shame people never understand poetry can't be taken literally. Love ya!
Love you too! xoxo
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Howdy blacklux! wow...alrighty then..my question is why write it at all? What's it's purpose?