You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: The Stitch Up - Short StoryView the full contextjayna (69)in #microfiction • 6 years ago Wow, great twist! I love the voice of this story. It's really true to the genre. Nice work, @raj808!
I'm glad you digged the gangster vibes jayna 😎🙂
And the twist. I wanted to flip the script, with the cocky young gangster being played for a fool and it seems the twist achieved that 😜