This is so lovely and bittersweet, @gaby-crb. I love how you suggested the memory and reaction indicate the character’s father is no longer living, without saying it or turning maudlin. Beautifully done!
This is so lovely and bittersweet, @gaby-crb. I love how you suggested the memory and reaction indicate the character’s father is no longer living, without saying it or turning maudlin. Beautifully done!