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You have a good narrative flow going, and some lovely images! This:
Her hair was waving in the breeze, she had beautiful brown eyes that contained the warming light of the universe, her smile was so comforting it could only belong to one person. It was ....
I won't dwell on the warm blood rushing out and escaping someone's body.... Love that final word! Valhalla

This one was so much fun to write. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! 😁

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Did grant lick the back of one of those frogs 🐸?

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Swamp gas!

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