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He looked at where the light came from, and saw pure white wings. He didn't know if these shining wings on her back were real or not.
would it be rude to ask about them?
That kind of thing was very uncommon around here.
He had only ever read of such beauty in books.
He just stood there staring at the beauty and thinking if he should ask.
What if he asked her and it was all his imagination? What if she hated him? Why would he care she if hated him? His mind started going in a weird direction.
He blinked, the pre-dawn light shimmering off the things, translucent dust motes in the desert-like. Nope. Still there. He could see each feather, delicate, and almost glowing, as if lit by something from the inside. He took one step to her....
"Um...execuse me?" he finally said to her, not having experience talking to girls at school
She looked at his direction and gasped and took a step back. "Wh- what are these?"
He couldn't understand her frightned expression. But she pointed at the nothingness behind his back and said "Are these wings real?"