last time
she was sitting on the bench,
when i approached to her,
i sit besides her,
and we were more silent than a silent.
after a while, she said "lets end this".
i was quite, she was quite,
maybe she was waiting for reply,
i know all of her,
but first time she feels stranger to me,
i looked into her eyes,
and tears falls down,
she said " its the last time, i am holding your hand",
she lied , it was not the last time :)
You did WHAT beside her???? O.O
lol corrected :D hahahaha that was maybe an autocorrect error , i didnt see that.
LOL, I like your poem... a few spelling errors made me giggle, but it is really sweet. <3
hahaha thanks for saving me from a blunder..
and special thanks for the appreciation
No problem! It was a good little chuckle, at first I thought it was meant to be funny, but I knew it was more heartfelt than it appeared. Such meaningfulness, I really like these kinds of heartfelt creations. <3
thank you very much for such a valuable comment @wishmaiden
You know, that's a pretty good poem. I'm impressed.
That's what I thought too! :)
thanks alot @cristof
Heart touching poem. I love poetry. Thanks Upvoted .
thanks alot dear for supporting my work @maya7
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