Hm.... what to say....what to say... THIS IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE READ IN A WHILE! It truly is!!! I love your flow of words and your rhyme, everything!!! It has something in it that I can not put my finger on but I just LOVE it! 💚 For some reason, it reminds me of Dr.Seus ;)
:) thank you so much @zen-art
I want my writing full of flaws and silliness like you are talking with a friend at a pub
For poetry .....you nailed it on the type of flow I enjoy, perhaps something is to be said for a sing-song simplicity