Thanks for the tips, and you're right! I wanted to edit some stuff, add some spacing, add even quotes or headlines to break the text up a bit, but I can't edit. :(

It keeps saying: Broadcast error, so that's what I'm struggling with at the moment, but you're definitely right, the first impression is key, I don't want it to look like a long text.

But thanks again! It's solid advice and I appreciate it.