wow i like the chronology of time in which you flow and the deep emotions unveiled in the amazing choice of words like"...i rub myself against the sand of sorrows and emerge dry".I like the way i deeply got connected to this poem.I'm a slam poet artist in my little community in Cameroon.i write poems too.I write poems too and very new on steemit.will be really honored you check out my posts.Sofie's Voice