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RE: How Long is Long Enough (An Original Short Poem)

in #life7 years ago

Exactly! I've had these thoughts going in my head sometimes too. Thanks for expressing them and letting us know we're not alone. Like, I know patience is a virtue and all that, and things that are worthwhile take time, but sometimes you don't know if you're just waiting for a miracle that will never come...

That feeling of uncertainty sucks. I like how at the end there is a sudden sort of "twist" as you mention a "you". So this could hint to how you may be referring to a particular person that you're waiting for that you're not sure would come around. Nice twist and relatable words. Thanks for sharing. :)

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