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RE: I Declined a Good Job Offer: And Now I Regret It
I want to catch people off guard, then you get the real laughs instead of the internalized LOL things. A good set up goes a long way. You're right though, and a few missed it here today, but at the top, third line, I foreshadowed. I knew it would happen. LOL!
I have gotten somewhat familiar with your style of storytelling, so you don't really catch me off guard. But I'm always a little giddy when I start reading and can't wait to see where you take the story, that is always a surprise!