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RE: JIHAD | A Journey Towards Nirvana | Episode 1
SUPERB, @honeychum. Absolutely superb start to a story. In a very crisp and fast paced manner, you have so beautifully given a heart wrenching and heart breaking and accurate description of innocent people caught in the crossfire of politics and terrorism. The build up of the action is superb from the eyes of the woman. The way you have written, @honeychum, it transports the reader into the woman and takes him on the heartbreaking journey. Awesome! I told you, you are a natural writer. A very real subject and a very effective writing.
Ruskin wrote in his "Flight of Pigeons", - "In a war or riot, irrespective of who wins, there is only one loser and that is a woman". It brought this to my mind while reading the story. Loved it. !!
Such a response is overwhelming. I am trying to improve my work. I hope it will reflect in this story. Responses like this keep up my spirit and boosts my energy. Thanks a lot buddy.
You are most welcome, @honeychum. Your writing is great. It is a pleasure to read your stories and episodes. They start perfectly and end at just the right moment. No drag ! A little work on , spellings and sentence structure always helps. But do not try to check your thought structure too much. Your thought structure is perfect and fresh !😊💕
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