The Magic Stone of the God of Thunder

in #life7 years ago


Fuente: http://www.panavision-tours.com/viajes/bahia-halong-vietnam/

Hello dear friends of steemit, thank you for being present on my blog and accompanying with reading my post. This is an adaptation of the story "pánfilo receives a lesson". Navigating the web crosses me with this story, speaks of a young man who lost his father as a boy, for this reason he becomes rebellious, tired, his mother seeks help, in this situation the young man will learn a lesson a beautiful story that begins well.

Many years ago, a very happy family lived in Halong Bay. It was a kind family, mom, dad and two small children, one of the children was named Alcides, one summer afternoon when the children were still small. Father of family went to another island in the company of his daughter, on the return he unleashed a great surfer dumping his boats and lost their lives.

This misfortune changed the life of this family forever, Alcides grew up alone with his mother, the loss of his family caused Alcides to be raised very rebellious, was to understand he was angry with life for the loss of his father.

The mother noticed the rebelliousness of her son, even though she agreed, she attributed this situation to the loss of her father and sister, Alcides realized this and took advantage of the situation without realizing the great damage that was caused, Became a surly and fighter.

Little by little I stopped being the child that everyone wanted, became disobedient, lacked respect for the elderly, including his teacher, with the children his age there was no day that he would not duel with a clenched fist, In favor of him in the fights always He was victorious, this was worse for him, his ego was enlarged and fought more and more.

One morning, as every day, he fought with a child called Antonio, Alcides, who was very skillful, gave as many blows of fists as he could on Antonio's face, after a while the entire bay was aware of Alcides's victorious fight, This news made the poor woman very distressed, she knew that her son was going astray.

Tired of enduring the character of his son decided to ask for help, he went to the hut of the sorcerer in the bay, a wise old man, able to remedy the irremediable, when he arrived before the sorcerer and when he was going to say he was going The wise man said.

Do not tell me woman, I know what you came for and what you are looking for!

The woman opened her eyes wide, could not believe the old man's vision

You've come looking for a solution for your child! You fear that tomorrow, the situation will get out of control and end up killing someone!

Have you come to that truth?

Yes my lord!

I do not know what to do!

At these words the old man took a moment to answer, then said.

Very well, I had a communication with the ancestors! I have been suggested to use the rock of God Thor, slowly walking inside the hut, in a corner was an object wrapped in a thick cloth.

In developing it you could see a very old-looking rock.

Take my daughter, this is an ancient rock! Has been kept for a long time, its magical powers, many years ago was used to take away forces to God Thor.

Thank you, my lord! What should I do with it?

Take the stone and at night put them in a bucket with water and in the morning your son bathe with it, said the wise old man.

Thank you, my lord! Likewise, I will do it as it is.

The woman slowly retired to her home, repeating again and again her appreciation to the wizard of the Bay.

At nightfall he did as he taught the old man, took a large bucket and filled it with water, then put the rock in the bucket and let them rest all night.

The next morning he took the bucket with water and gave his son to bathe, before going to do some shopping, after the bathroom retired to do the purchases that his mother asked.

On the way he met with his last opponent Antonio, again they were braided to blows, although this time happened something different, Antonio gave a great beating to Alcides, for the first time in his life had received so many blows that returned to his home full of bruises Purple

Returning home full of shame, could not understand how it was to lose a fight that had already won, how could not defend, throughout his life, no one was able to give him tremendous goliza.

When he saw him, his mother for the first time was happy that his son had lost a fight, deep down he felt sorry to see everything hit, he went straight to his room with a face of failure, she knew what had happened, were the Magical stones that had taken effect, giving a lesson to his son.

Alcides just came out of his room to do his needs, he spent so much time alone in his bedroom that he used to think and think about all the bad things that were happening in his life because of the character he had adopted.

One morning he left his room as a new person, from that day he dedicated himself to apologize to all the elderly people with whom he had had a bad behavior, all the Bay saw the great change of Alcides everyone again wanted for their great behavior .

Fuente: http://www.mundoprimaria.com/cuentos-populares/panfilo-recibe-una-leccion/

Te espero mañana para disfrutar de otro relato de mi tierra de Corrientes.

José Luis Fernández
Corrientes Argentina




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