RE: Well, Are You? Part One of a Series; Sexist
Sexism is a serious issue with serious negative consequences for those effected and those not. I suspect your post will be well received by some women who share your expressed views (feelings?).
However, since I am not a women and don't have the bias caused by mistreatment, for me the post missed the mark.
From the title I thought I would find some pointers on how to show respect to women. Nope. After the first few sentences I thought this was going to be a good male bashing article (entertaining). Nope. What I got out of your post is you've been hurt your whole life (seriously Mother?), you're bitter and you have a bit of a potty mouth (which I liked). Sure there were some decent male bashing lines in the article (nice) but nothing came through more clear than the bitterness.
I'll end my comment with a snarky remark.
I'm not going to objectify you by saying you have a beautiful smile (you do). Instead I will say I noticed you have all your front teeth and they appear to be aligned.
hahahaa, thank you for the compliment and the truly thoughtful comment!
I am really working on my writing and had a bit of a difficult time with this one, so you're not wrong about it being a bit all over the place. I'm glad you enjoyed the parts you enjoyed and I will take your notes to heart!
thanks again!
b.