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RE: #HHG9: @ainie.kashif Minnow Celebration, Join Us in 'Blog With Love' Challenge!
Hi @rvag5, congrats on your first Haiku, so as it needs 5-7-5, yours currently is 6-6-8 so I have made a slight corrections below.
We are like the loose wind (6 syllables)
In love you win and lose (6 syllables)
There is always a good reason. (8 syllables)
My version
Love comes like the wind (5)
Love wins and lose without clues(7)
We long for true love (5)
Hope you will like my version :D