Volcano: A Micropoem

in #kudospoetry7 years ago (edited)

Volcano

pressure building
impossible
to contain

hot magma
probes to find
a way out

won't take
much more
before it explodes

it's just not
a good day

Image by Skeeze on Pixabay

My thanks to @tinypaleokitchen and @thinknzombie for looking this poem over for me.

This is my entry in the kudos short poetry contest run by @nikisteem and @damianjayclay.




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Excellent description of how it feels to be overwhelmed and down. Love this, Bex!

This is probably how Vesuvius felt.

'Back off people, this won't end well!'

I like the term micropoem! :)

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