[11/07] Checkpoint Review 2
Overall Comments Moving Forward
Criticisms include missing the mark regarding the method or medium that I decided to present to everyone today. My research should display or expand upon the sensibilities of everyday life between North and South Korea, and how I can begin to expand upon them. It felt like just a presentation of facts without going into the "why". More historical context is needed where I'm able to explain the events leading up to their divide in a nutshell. We've discussed the possibility of this proposal taking on the route of an OMA project, where it is purely about the research, leaving out the architectural aspect of the project.