Killthepad - Eye Contact

in #killthepad6 years ago


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Killthepad week 13 hosted by @jamesgetsit, sponsored by @dsound and SMA.

Today's topic is Eye Contact

I See You


Long hair, oh so long
They way she curled it with her finger felt so wrong
I turned to the mirror, reflection of the sky
Then I swear I saw a smile from the corner of my eye
Quick glance, mind games, she looked away
We were gonna talk, I had time today!!
The stare game was artistic
Eyes flickered matching wits
Can't win I'd you don't try, I dared the statistics
Watched as the waiter blended her mixed drink
Man this chick downed it without smearing her lipstick
Another look, she smiled sadistic
As she saw the way man's shifting
Heart beating, she opened her bag and was snack feasting
Radio came on, I tried whistling
Was getting nervous with this fine vixen
She dropped a line with me and we rhymed in sync
Now face to face and my mind fleeting
She smiles sweetly and we feel the electric fire
I stare at her face, straight into the eye of the tiger 🐅

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This is dope brother! You always have a knack for painting the whole picture with your words. A few times you lost me with the end rhymes. I could tell some of them were slants with an emphasis on the last syllable of the rhyme, but others were very hard to connect the dots.

Really enjoyed this piece!

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