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RE: Week 9 Kill the Pad Challenge- Theme Peace
So many awesome metaphors in here and your flow is so dope too. I like how you balance the negative and positive when talking about peace. This was my favourite line,
He got a plan, when things don’t add up.
Peace overflows like toilet stopped up.
Thank you! I laughed whenever that line came out. I said, well it works :D