Awesome! I am honored that you used the intro :) I liked your lines. My feedback from @jamesgetsit, was to use double syllables at the end of your lines. Now I am noticing which rappers do that, and which ones don't. You do have a lot of good lines that succeed in the double syllable theory. I liked the last line...

should i chill? I could be a stand up witness
Or pack votes and gather steem like a startup business!

Grats on winning the contest this week!!