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RE: "KILL THE PAD" CHALLENGE WEEK #3 - SPONSORED BY SMA

in #killthepad6 years ago

What you gonna do when your side divides issues until they no longer include you; forced to conform too?

Damn, loved this one.

The content is DOPEEEE. I just want to see the structure more worked out. The bars here are super over extended.

Example:

I’m free to expression; free to contemplate obsession; to calculate or speculate or moderate the moderate.

Should really be something along the lines of

I’m free to expression; free to contemplate obsession
to calculate or speculate or moderate the moderate.

Seems like a small thing, but makes a big difference. Other than that, I really loved this one, good shit!

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