Dammmnnnn son!

Freedom given, it is an illusion that is planted in your mind
If you fail to take it, freedom is something you'll never find

Loved this one, great ending. Really liked some of your schemes too and you switched up your scheme too in a couple places which is really fucking cool. Really dig it. I would love to see some more multi-syllable rhyme schemes in there. Not just single words that rhyme in a bar leading up to the end rhyme, but multiple words that make multiple syllables and still rhyme together.

Really great entry, really good. Appreciate you participating!