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RE: Kill the Pad Challenge Week #3 - 'Freedom' - Entry by @bryandivisions
Dope dude!! The last 4 bars were really good. Only thing I think could be improved is a bit more consistency in the syllables within the rhymes themselves. Mostly it's always just the end rhymes, would be really cool to see some multi-syllable rhymes in there as well, and I think it would go great with your flow as well.
Peace brother!
Bet bro thanks for hosting and providing feedback!!