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RE: "KILL THE PAD" CHALLENGE SUBMISSION THREAD WEEK #1 - SPONSORED BY STEEM MUSIC ALLIANCE
Here is my entry! Hope you enjoy!
https://steemit.com/killthepad/@deadeversince/kill-the-pad-challenge-week-1-submission-bullying
Sweet!! Can't wait to read it man!
Very deep entry, with nice/noncliche good rhyming pattering and rhythm and I liked about 80% of it but the last few lines do raise concern. Only because I know truly how we can fail to cope with such tyranny oppression and violent abuse. We are quick to retaliate and involve innocent lives as we seek vengeance so I hope you have been able to handle your growth from these situations in a better light and I am sorry you went through what you went through. You are not alone at all. We shall stay stronger than those who had laid hands with bad intentions
Thanks man, i have grown a extreme amount since then its been a good 14 years and im stronger then ever :) but its a level most people dont get to see or hear about which i remember very well, i knew it would be somewhat controversial towards the end but unfortunately it becomes a very rational thought when your falling off the edge of sanity. I really appreciate the feedback :)
Loved this man!! Left a full critique on your post!