Poem#1: The Brain and the Heart

in #killerpoetry7 years ago (edited)

My entry for the Killer Poetry Contest by @rumplestiltskin. Thank you for initiating this!

A heart that was once brand new
Became shattered out of the blue
Only little did she know
She became cold, as cold as snow

Last thing she knew, she was happy
How come her eyes became teary?
Are you okay? The brain just asked
The heart was shy , she wore a mask

Everyone thought she was happy
The brain knew the truth she bury
She may smile but her eyes can't lie
The brain can only utter a sigh.


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I'm sorry for this photo, i can't find anything in the internet that fits with the poem. So i did the drawing. hehehe

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Great write, well put together. Really liked it :) shows the barier between the brain and the heart. The truth will always be known by the heart, it is just not always clear

I think you may be interested in my blog, it has similar kind of ideas, I hope you like them too !

My Quote: Why put layers of filth over a heart .. just let it beat.

https://steemit.com/@roselilly

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