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RE: "Her Eyes" — Keangaroo Writing Contest Prompt
Gorgeous! How can simple words put together, just so, paint so many beautiful images, invoke so much feeling?
I love hearing which lines become reader favorites. Mine:
Hazy,
lazy orbs
traveling
in vast space
twinkling
a stray star
from a far
universe
Every line is beautiful, of course!
Some speak to one person more, others speak for another.
Thank you for entering, Yahia! I'm honored.
O, I'm delighted you approve! If the words have power it is because behind them, animating them, is an unforgettable look from a real person (many, many years go...) Happy to share this memory and these feelings with you and readers, and hope it helps evoke their own. Many thanks, for uplifting response, my friend!