The formatting of you post could use a little bit of work. You should only use the headings feature for "titles" So for the first paragraph I would suggest a header of <h2>Why</h2>. You also need to fix your image link. This post contains several links to very helpful markdown guide. It was done by @thecryptofiend. His was the link I used when first starting out and learning how to format post on steemit. As you spend more time on steemit, you will see post that have many different styles, some of them very eye catching and pleasing, and others that are just a lot of run on words. Editing your post and making them look as good as possible is very important, and not an easy thing to do.
          This link here by @inquiringtimes, contains a lot of very useful links, and would be a good place to find links to other useful tools and ideas.