I read both the English and Italian version (I can understand Italian, even though I cannot speak it). I must say, the Italian version has a different spin to it, it feels stronger and better. Maybe when wanting to make it rhyme in English, there was a lot that was twisted and changed to fit the rhyme. In a way, I would think it would have been better not use rhyme. Really good job though; totally loved the Italian version. The last line is written exceptionally, :"Perchè la morte arriva e con voi nulla portate." It emphases the point really well, to something that was already said earlier, but in a more concrete tone.