@writingonthewall. You tried in making this introduction post. But as a community that helps newbies, we would like to help you do the introduction post right and learn other things about Steemit. First, here is a link to instructions on how to do your Introduction post well:

https://steemit.com/hive-172186/@cryptokannon/achievement-1-mentor-by-cryptokannon-verification-through-introduction

Second, as you already joined our community, check our page @steemalive for some helpful guides. You can also check our resource center on: http://steemalive.com/beginner-guides/