Good job and good idea getting an intro post. It's honestly the most important thing you'll do on Steemit for the first few months. It's a way to let people know about yourself, make some friendly early on, and people will try to welcome you to the community. It's typically going to be your highest earning post for a while as well so take full advantage of it.

One piece of advice, I see you only used two tags. You may want to add "introduction" , "life" , "story" etc. Basically use up all 5 tags.