I don't know what it is about your writing. I could read it continually without getting bored. One of my favorite lines, in the early part of the story, was about Luna "prancing around, ignoring social norms" lol. I don't know, it just hit my funny bone just right.
This is your calling, it seems.....you are a naturally gifted writer. I have upvote a few of your posts because they pull me in, made me read them. You should do more, a lot more.
Oh, btw. The picture in your previous post https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@jessandthesea/inside-the-mind-of-a-reluctant-cam-girl-and-how-steemit-could-change-my-life
at the end of the post, the picture of you and Luna, is really good. You can see the calmness in your eyes, the happiness. I'm thinking that is the real you. It is hard to fake that. Anyway, I hope you do more stories on Steemit and less of the other things. This is what you should do......