Hi @drdave well, welcome to steemit community. Welcome to join this fabulous paltfrom and hopefully to grow in the future. In my opinion, your introduction is good. But it would be nice to mark 5 markers every time you make a post. Hopefully you feel at home here @drdave...
Thank you for the advice - will do that from now on... So far I have nothing but praise for Steemit and the community at large...