trying to catch up on all of your posts as best as I can, nice open introduction, I'll do make sure to give more detailed feedback on each coming episode that you release in hopes to inspire or trigger an idea or direction for your developing story. Glad you have joined the community and are now sharing your work. As a creative artist, I too strive for perfection, but we must also keep in mind that flaws also have their own beauty and tale to tell. Upvoted