To be fulfilled, a seer clear

in #inspiration7 years ago

To be fulfilled, a seer clear

original poetry


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Happiness is the stillness
         Mahogany moment of reflection
That spawns before time begins
         That pacifies my restlessness
& persists through twilit stages
         & restores the dropless pond


         Clarity is the willingness
                  Cerulean lens that magnifies,
         That reaches through the briars
                  Amplifies what dimly glows
         Assuages wilderness with touch
                  & roars the conflagration high.


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                  Acceptance is the bravery
                           Crimson bell with regal tone
                  That reconciles nightmares
                           Resounds a knight's resolve
                  Ignites the thrust of destiny
                           Rushes forth with certainty.


                                    Fulfillment is the knavery
                                             Sunshine glider slicing sky
                                    That, stubborn, holds eternity
                                             That soars through smog of doubt
                                    Contented, keeps perfection near:
                                             Happy, clear, accepting seer.


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Written by
@d-pend
12/9/17
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Lovely, Is this a poem within a poem? Does this style have a name?

Big upvote for noticing!
I don't have a name for this style
But I could probably come up with a silly one
Pretty quick xD

Silence of clarity disturbs the spirit of the poet, writing relaxes the vibrations of inspiring content. Renewal energy in a cosmic ballet - relaxation finds a place in the brave fluid of positive words.
Unique picture in the change of capitals, aspiring and new in the content of key enthusiasm. Magical @d-pend as always

Fulfillment is choas
Small vibrant stones
In a cluster
Hidden beneath
A blue boulder.

As always, excellence in words. I read this like a narrative...with a separate narrative coming from somewhere beyond. Love the form. :)

I really love your writing style. SO authentic and thought provoking.

I also love to write, and would appreciate your feedback! If you could check out some of my work I would appreciate it. I don't have much up yet as I am new to Steemit, but I will be posting regularly!

This one tends to deliver by using speeches and pictures to convey its meaning. I like the structure too as well

Well written. I enjoyed it. Thank you.

Nice poem nice nature pics

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