Awesome entry as usual. :)

I couldn't help but notice this part..

I had a judge comment that he wasnt a fan of all the small stories in my post.

I don't expect you to rat the person out and tell me who it was, BUT.. I do sort of think I know who it is already, I'm guessing it's the new judge who isn't the greatest at English, so it's probably extra difficult for him to understand long blocks of text.

I wouldn't worry about it at all, me and charisma777 both love it and we want more people to role play and do what you're doing.. So.. Whichever judge said that, that's their own problem and maybe they shouldn't even be a judge in the first place if a bit of extra text is a problem for them.