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I am going to tell you a story about depressed woman and her daughter, this post is in response to : #4 Minnowhelper Writing Contest!!!! by @minnowhelper .

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"What happened, why are looking so tired" Ananyas mom asked sadly

" Nothing, just a headache" Ananya replied.

Just now she came back home from the tuition class, she seemed very tired after arriving, a few minutes later she vomited. Her mother worried about her, and thought what could be a problem, because Ananya was 17, at this age, women will meet the greatest consequences of life. Every mother who has teenage daughters lives as if she was burning in a fire.

She takes her daughter in the room, examine her body, Ananya was wearing a white slip, her breasts slightly stimulated, and her nipple’s moisture appeared as dark circles on the slip. All of these symptoms revealed that she was pregnant. The mother was shocked and did not have time to inquire about what happened . She had to hide it from this society, must prevent to her daughter being cursed, this is happening because of her ignorance.

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Women have lots of problems because of society, the society looks down on them if they pregnant before marriage, the same society praises them when they get pregnant after marriage, but they aren't blaming the men. What to do, women are also suffering simply of nature. She thought to go to the doctor's clinic, to abort the pregnancy.
"Get ready to go to the doctor, " she said to Ananya.

"Doctor?" she asked with curiosity

"Yes! Don't you know the reason, " she replied angrily to her.

Ananya's eyes filled with tears like a pond with her mother knowing the biggest mistake of her life. At the same time her dad came home. Both were shocked. If he finds this thing, he will kill both.

"What’s going on?, Why are you sad like this?" he asked.

"She is suffering from stomach pain, so we are going to the doctor's clinic", she lied to him

"Oh! How long it was, let me take her to the clinic."

"No!" she was tense initially, and then she calmed down and said " It’s all about women thing, you don’t need to go with her, I will take care of her, don't worry."

She immediately took her daughter, and left the house. On the way she inquired her daughter.

"Who has hurt you like this?"

"He is the son of a wealthy man, On Valentine's Day, I met him and told me I was very beautiful and loved me"

"Oh, I see, and you know his address?"

"No, I did not ask him about it, he took me to the beach two weeks ago, we were both playing in the sea, our clothes were wet and we dried clothes in a nearby lodge." she cried
Her mom understood what might be happening in the lodge, she didn't want to hurt her any more. Actually mistake is done by parents, not children, parents should educate the children about sex and precautions, they should teach the awareness, they do not hesitate to take these things to them.

They reached the clinic, the doctor was in the inner room, and after a while they were allowed to see the doctor. It was a female doctor, so they reluctantly informed everything.

The doctor examined her and looked at her sarcastically, then she started to talk to her mother.

"The test results are positive, such an affair at this age is very nasty and blithering, you are the responsible for this, the reason is her not being raised properly, you should have have been more strict with her. I also have children and they too are teenagers, they have never behaved like this," the doctor had scolded Ananya's mother, she told them to sit outside in the waiting room. The mother depressed, she felt she had been cursed because of her daughter.

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Just that moment the doctor's son entered the clinic, he walk by them hastily and went inside.

Ananya hit her mom with her elbow said "This is the guy that I am talking about"

"Are you sure? He seems the doctor's son," she asked with doubt.

"Yes, he told his mom is a doctor," she confirmed.

Her blood boiled with anger, and with her anger rising high, she went into the back with without permission. "Now is not the time to control girls, but control the boys and teach them discipline. Now, we are not going to abort the pregnancy, but going to lodge a complain against your son for raped a minor girl"

Now the doctor shocked, "I am sorry!, I was wrong about my children. Lets resolve it, please calm down" she pleaded to the mother.

💚THE END 💚

Original short story authored by @jyoti-thelight

Thank you for reading my post, please don't forget to upvote if you like this. Through this post I would like to thank all my well wishers, supporters and upvoters.

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The moral of the story is important and something that should be written about. The plot was well thought out too, for the most part.

However there are an abundance of grammatical mistakes throughout the text. If you don’t mind, I can edit it for you. This way you may be able to write an even better post the next time!

Let me know if you want me to edit it.

Cheers!

Sure you can do, and will be helpful for me

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thank you for reading and the feedback

Original Content as always...The story reflects the hippocratic society we live in..always happy to point out whats wrong with others while the wrongs within.

yes i agree with you, thank you for reading

hippocratic* society

Hypocritical*

Hippocrates was an Ancient Greek physician attributed as being the father of medicine. Hence the Hippocratic oath.

corrected..thanks for pointing out..

Yw. Just to clarify, It should say, “hypocritical”

Awesome story :)
Thanks for sharing!!

THANK YOU FOR READING

That was beautifully written!

thank you for the feedback

you're welcome :)

Excellent story from you again,thanks for sharing

Thank you dear, I appreciate your feedback.

Very well written jyoti.

thank you for reading

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very good post friend I'm great, you have a new fan I hope soon you can visit my blog maybe something you like

thank you , i will

Wow,great story again.This is real fact when the mistakes are done my our family members why we didn't take action against them.

You are right, hope the next generation will change the society

Yes sure it has to start with us, then we will see the chang in to others.

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