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RE: Now that The US Government is closed, here's what I really think.
By the second time I read this I had the vague sense that I was reading a Tom Holt passage, I even got the little fairytale narrator voice with a tinge of sarcasm in my head.
Very nice writing , and I think this could be expanded into a short maybe. At first I felt the FBI and NSA was there for no reason but on second read it ties in with the no one is listening in my opinion.
Tom Holt, I'll have to give him a read. I aim for comic-strip short satire, sarcasm, and mostly humor. Sometimes political, sometimes not. Sometimes I hit, and sometimes not. I'm fairly new, and honing my craft. Please give (what is think is) my funniest post, a read: https://steemit.com/funny/@sanitizemylife/memos-released-and-help-wanted-gallows-builders-and-noose-loopers, and let me know what you think. I had a blast writing it. Here's my second funniest: https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@sanitizemylife/introductions-got-a-minute-hi-it-s-me-over-here-i-just-wanted-to-introduce-myself Let me know what you think???