I love it. It could use polish, but if the story works, the story works.
And this works. You win the fiction award for Best of Steemit for Saturday, coming out in a couple minutes.
I love it. It could use polish, but if the story works, the story works.
And this works. You win the fiction award for Best of Steemit for Saturday, coming out in a couple minutes.
Oh wow, thanks! Felt this one was a bit rough myself, but in the end decided it played to the sort-of authenticity factor, so I let it be.