I was just reading this post when I saw a notification pop up in my phone saying that unknown Gun men killed a police PRO's then I saw it in yours that the protagonist killed the police commissioner. You've nailed this witchcraft story with good word choices and markdown styles application. The way the storyline is just perfect and not out of scope is what I enjoy about this post. This story reminded me of a movie I watched called Amaya who had a snake that protected the protagonist as well. Looking forward to reading more of your stories and wishing you best of luck in this contest.