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RE: Lo veo y lo siento - Concurso de Escritura
Hi dear,
I read your text and you can find the report in the comment section.
Title: Make yourself visible and use a title that makes people want to read you. If you remove the "contest"part your title is perfect
Task:
Describe what you see: you should do this with simple words like: I see a sun, orange sky, birds flying
Describe what you feel if you look at the picture: I feel afraid, lonely, jealous (see the list with feelings mentioned in Lesson 1)
If you do what is asked above you give yourself room to think in a different way. @joslud described it in his first entry, you might have a look at it.
I thank you for your entry and wish you a great day.