Your text describes emotions and your feelings well. A mistake made with a friend. There is nothing that hurts as much as problems with our friends that we love. You expressed it well...

As a recommendation, it would be better if you do not mention within the text that you are doing an exercise or task about the images, that is, forget this completely and not mention it and go directly to it. Because by mentioning this you go outside your narrative or what you want to express and it is important not to steal that attention. It's a suggestion for improvement.

Dear, in the links it is preferable that you add the original links of the photos, in the contest publication the sources are placed.

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