RE: Steemit Engagement Challenge WOX, S10W5: Collage my Life | @lllll1ll
Hello @lllll1ll
Thank you very much for participating in the challenge "The collage of my life".
Your original work, at first glance is complex to read, but when you read the text it all makes sense.
The use of a cabinet as a central figure seems to me almost avant-garde and breaks with the concept I had of collage.
Technically, the cutting of the figure is perfect, from this I deduce that you are a tidy and perfectionist person. The use of the leftover paper in the form of geometric figures creates a nice composition and looks much better against the dark background you finally used.
A minor detail to improve would be the photo of the finished collage, which is a bit dark on one side. I always photograph my collages next to a window with natural light to avoid shadows.
I hope this is the first collage in a series.
Good work.
Thank you for your understanding and advice!
As for the final result with a shadow, I made a conscious decision to leave it that way, because if you hang a collage on the wall in an ordinary room without additional lighting, then this is about how it can look in the interior. It seems to me that this shadow on the right has become a full participant in the composition. Maybe I'm wrong.
Perfect, if the shadow is intentional, that's fine!