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RE: Wox Booming Support Program / Collage Contest, theme "FOOD"

in WORLD OF XPILARlast year

Hi @emmawalt.

Thanks for participating again in the collage contest.

In your food collage there are some good things and some things to improve.

The background is very well worked, I can see that you put a lot of interest in it, which I value very positively...although I would have made it more monochrome, using predominantly black and white cut-outs of the recipes so that the coloured cut-outs you put on top would stand out more.

But the background is hardly noticeable because in my opinion there are too many images, which obscures it almost entirely. If the background is aesthetic, you have to let it show.

I really like the use of words with different typographies.

The photograph of the collage is a bit dark, it lacks some light. Maybe if you put the collage near a natural light source it would look brighter.

There are some details to improve in your work but you are on the right track.

Cheers!

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Hi @silviadiez, thanks for your instructions, yes maybe I put too many things altogether! :D

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