Saiyans Pride - My Creative Writing

judethedude (64)in WORLD OF XPILAR • last month

There was this curious planet called planet Smiggle There was a warrior race called the saiyans, there was a myth that a special saiyan could do something no other saiyan could. It was to go Super Saiyan! This myth was told for many many years. One day this saiyan was born called Dolichos. He was born and cried immediately.

Dolichos had an older brother called Delochi, Delochi was getting recruited for the fighting team of planet Smiggle. He was a true warrior at heart. Once Dolichos stopped crying his mother took him to get dressed and then made him some food to eat.

15 years later Dolichos was training everyday to become a super saiyan, the legendary myth, but no one believed in him except his brother, his brother was there to train him day in and day out until they fell over tired. The next morning Dolichos went to go find his brother to train but he couldn't find him anywhere, Not even his dad knew where Delochi was. Then abruptly there were loud tremors and the planet was being attacked by a force called the Hoctopods. They were a terrifying force that went across the galaxy and attacked, sometimes destroying entire planets! Delochi went to battle them with the attack force planet Smiggle had. Dolichos tried rushing in to help his brother but his mother wouldn't let him. Dolichos was put into a spaceship and sent to another planet far away. As he was flying away he saw his planet get blown up and everything with it.

3 Years later Dolichos woke up on a new planet, he had no idea where he was or what to do. Some time after landing some of the species on the planet called humans came to look at what had fallen from outer space. Dolichos was startled and went into battle formation but they told him he had no reason to be scared they were friendly. After bringing Dolichos to their houses they told him this planet was called earth, it was home to humans. Dolichos kept trying to tell the humans about the Hoctopods and their leader Hoctopod. None believed him though. After some time Dolichos got himself a wife. Her name was Taron and she was the most beautiful girl on earth. The only one that believed Dolichos about the Smiggle force was Taron, she appreciated Dolishos training all the time to protect her and the earth. Dolichos kept training every day for the next 20 years. Until the fateful day arrived. The Hoctopods Had found earth and came to destroy it just like he destroyed planet Smiggle.

Until the fateful day arrived. The Hoctopods Had found earth and came to destroy it just like he destroyed planet Smiggle.
Dolichos went straight into battle but it was way out numbered it was 100 men vs Dolichos. He didn't care. All he had to do was protect his world no matter the costs. Dolichos was about to go and take down his men but then out of nowhere Hoctopod came in front of his army with Taron! He had captured her and used her as a hostage to make Dolichos listen to their every command. Now he didn't know what to do because if he didn't listen to Hoctopod they would kill Taron.

Dolichos was about to give up but then Taron screamed and told him to defeat them all! Hoctopod didn't like this and slapped her, making Dolichos mad but he couldn't do anything about it. Now dolichos was helping them destroy cities. But then as they were on the final quarter of earth Hoctopods called Dolichos to the ships main quarters and killed Taron right in front of him! This infuriated Dolichos making him so mad he went super saiyan! He was the first super saiyan in his entire species! Now he was really really mad and it was time for Hoctopod to pay!

But as he tried to get to Hoctopod the force came and stopped him, they said he would have to fight all 100 of them to get the boss. But Dolichos didnt care he flew past all of them punching and shoving them into the ships walls then blasted Hoctopod through the ship now they were clashing mid air! Dolichos got a direct punch making Hoctopod fly into the floor making a huge crater but Dolichos wasn't done he flew straight to him and started pounding him into the floor! Just then Hoctopod transformed into his final form! Now Hoctopod had leveled the field they were clashing making massive craters wherever they went. Dolichos wasn’t going to lose this! They had taken his life and his wife! Dolichos began to rage at the thought of it and shoved Hoctopod into the mountains nearby with a beam! Then he flew in and crazy speed and finished him off with a final blow making the entire mountain explode!