Hello Professor and artist @jorgevandeperre
Interesting points, I hadn't particularly considered it, but the corrections you make are very objective, that's what it's all about.
Sometimes by wanting to highlight some things we end up creating imbalance, as in the case of the lines that are very marked, but I will keep it in mind now, and I will avoid doing it.
The parallelism is also another detail that I did not consider properly, with the lines that you have drawn it is evident.
Thank you very much for the experience and the recommendations.