"Creating Stories Week #17"|| The Mysterious Encounter ||

in WORLD OF XPILAR3 years ago (edited)

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Characters:

Husband
Wife
Son

Setting:

House
Mountain
Airport
City
Farm
Other country

In a very mountainous part of the city, there once lived a very happy family. But they had only one kid. They were away from civilization, like living in an isolated area. Because of the poor living, and lack of resources, the wife decided to go abroad that time. But the husband insisted not to let her go since he already knew that it is so hard to be apart. He just wanted to be with his family and help each other's hands whatever happens. But as the days go by, the wife couldn't sleep for how many days as she was thinking about it. So she talked to her husband again and told him she really wanted to go. The husband got nothing to do with it. So he just let her wife to be abroad.

On the day of the wife's flight, they were all emotional, because they would be apart for the first time. They hugged each other while having tears flowing down their faces.

Days, weeks, months, even years have passed, the contract of the wife's employment abroad was almost over. So they were so excited with each other to see and unite again.

And today, today is the day, the day of his wife's arrival. The husband and the son were both excited as they would be in each other's arms again. When the wife arrived at home, the husband ever wondered what happened with his wife since she's seems she's out of her mind, like as you could see, she was thinking from afar and she was like looking out of nowhere. So the husband talked to her and asked her what happened.
Husband: Hey babe, what happened? What's with that reaction on your face?
Wife: Uh!!!! Huh??!!!,,,,,Nothing.

Days passed after the arrival of the wife.

H: Babe, could you please look out for our son? I am just going to visit the farm and check if I could harvest something there.
W: Oh, sure no problem.

Mother and Son's Convo:

Mother: Son, could you please bring that thing outside for me? (while pointing the trash).
Son: Sure Mama.

Minutes passed being outside ,,,,,,,,

Son: Mama, what are you doing? Please put that thing down Mama. Please I beg you,,, (while crying so hard)...
M: Sssssshhhhhh,,, It's okay baby. Just hang in there.
S: Mamaaaaa,,,, pleaseee...,,,,
M: Will you please SHUUUUTTTTT UPPP!!!! UHHHHH!!! UHHHHH!!! DIEEEE!!! DIEEE!!!!
S: Mama,, I don't want t,,,,,,,,,,,,o,,,,,,,,,,,. (losing out of breath).

After how many hours, the husband went back from the farm. As he talking to his wife while saying that he was hungry.

Husband: Babe, I am hungry, could you please give me some foods?
Wife: (As she was preparing the table in silence)...,,,,,,,,
H: Babe, where is our son?
W: (a moment of silence),,,, Here, you eat first.
H: (supposed to eat,, but while sipping the soup),,,,,,,,,,,,,,
: Oh my!!!!! What is this??? A human's hands? As he looking at the food carefully, while thinking as if he was dreaming all along that time. He saw the internal organs, the eyeballs, and everything in a bowl made with hot soup.
W: (Laughing so hard like crazy and picked up the sharp knife on the table as she was walking slowly towards her husband).
H: (While in so much emotion). What have you done???? Where is our son??? Why??? What are you doing now? What happened to you???? Please,,,,,,,
W: (Just laughing, while chasing her husband outside the house).

While running so hard, the husband saw the other parts of his son's body hanging on the tree.
H: (Crying so hard),,,,,, Please don't do this. Please. I beg you!!!!!

While his wife did not listen a single word, and almost got him to be stabbed, but it's like the weather seems to be in opposite direction now. Because he could not stop his wife, he was so furious that time.

He killed his wife, and after that, he killed his own self, by hanging on the tree with the other parts of his son's body.

--------------To be continued---------------

I hope you enjoy a little scary with my story. Thank you for initiating this unique contest @adeljose.

Always,
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Oh what a tragic story.

Anyway thanks for subscribing to #steemitachievers, you may use #steemitachievers as one your tags in your future posts.

I think you are good in making stories, try another one with a wonderful ending and make it consistent so youll get lots of audience/readers and eventually get good upvotes.

Keep safe!

@steemitachievers thank you so much for noticing my post. Tags noted. Thank you. I will make better entries soon, and I will make the part 2 soon.

Your story is quite strong @hae-ra. It would be great if you could explain the sudden change the mother had from her experiences abroad in a second part.

@leonelb thank you. And don't worry, I will make your request soon for part 2,,,.

 3 years ago 

Trágico final

 3 years ago 

Greetings friend @hae-ra

Interesting story full of terror and suspense, although I didn't see the relation with the theme of the contest.

Thank you for your entry to the contest.

Participant #01

@adeljose thank you for the consideration. It's always my pleasure.

Hola hae-ra. Muy interesante esta historia de amor y tragedia. Su ida para el extranjero la hizo cambiar para mal. Si le hizo eso a su propio hijo, que se podría pensar hacia los demás. Bueno, como todo es una historieta de película. Exitos. Saludos.
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