A human | Story to participate in #rashia-contest

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In now a days sami got some new habits. But the habits were worth and wanted more money to spend. One of them was "Hunting". Sami wanted to hunt birds, and animals with his gun. He don't have enough money for his habit. His gun was very old, because it was owned by his grandfather, very old. He needed more money to upgrade the amno fir his new habiit. Second of his habit was to travel in different places of his country, but he was unable to travel with less money. He thought he will ask for help from his friends. He was thinking that my every friend will help me, some of them will be ready with me. Because these are common habits that people start liking them very fast.
Sami went to his friend for asking for some money. His friend listened him very carefully, it was looking he will help. At last he says: Brother i don't have enough money, to help you."
Sami thought then why he did make my fun. He was not poor. Sami went to his home with bore face.
Sami was not a poor boy. In those days his needs was some high. He always helped his friends, without their askings. But now everyone was making fun of him. He was very angry. After some days he went to his teacher. He told him all story. His teacher said:"Sit and listen a story"
He was free so he sat there. His teacher started the story:
"Once upon a time, there was poor people in the village. They were very Hard working. Their work was with wood. That's why they often used to go to forest. One day they went to the forest, one little boy with them. The boy left them by mistake, in forest. They were finding him and the boy was finding them. When they did reach to place near by river they saw some pieces of human's body.
They understood, that was the body of the boy, because of his clothes. They found some indication of boas there, it was big snake. And the snake was in front of them. One old man said to snake : 'why you are scrimping people' (he knew the language of animals) And the snake quietly went away.
After many time that old man went there, he saw snake is very weak and some kids are playing with it. Some was sit on it. The old man ask to snake ' why you are like this'
snake replied 'Because you told'
old man said 'be that what you are, but don't be much like bitter gourd, that's why people kill you. And don't be much like sugar, that's make your honour down.' "
The teacher told to sami: "What you learnt from it?"
Sami replied:"I will make myself, not too much like bitter gourd, and not too much like sugar."
Now he is being very well maintained person, he help other till now. But he got great experience, so now he take his step after very thinking.


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@Abdt great story with a great lesson to be learned! :) good job

Could you make it an open end? A ending that could continue, where the readers wonder how it would go on.

The story is over after the last sentance, I am left with no questions or wondering what became of Sami.

There are still 4 hours left until the deadline. The way it is now, I can not use it as a valid entry to the contest. Sorry

No problem, it was enough for me. I can't edit it to more and more. would you like to read my other story Travel of dreams part1
Part 2


Note I am not asking to add them in contest. I know I am failed in contest. I am asking for reading only. Every advice on the story will be appreciated.

Thank you so much. I will gladly read it after i have taken the next step in the contest.

Sorry about failing in the contest... but the story is amazing! I understand you can't stretch the story infinitely

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