Travel Of Dreams Part 1 | Competition 86 By @xpilar
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I am not a good writer but i have decided , i am writing my first story in English , on steemit . This is the link where you can join this challenge too.
The sun was enhancing water's shining with its light. I was happy there , i just saw the moon , behind the clouds ,there was mind-blowing ,everything. I didn't saw any view like that before.
Rewind
I am riz , and people know me as a guardian in travels. The people says that i am very rude with them. But no one wants to know, why? I am happy , with what i am ,i do my work with my whole skills. Last year ria (my ex) left me , she was disappointed from me and my work. I don't know why , the people , the girls want money . i never went back for her, after she left me.
Nowadays i am with a family , they want to watch the beauty of my country. So i am doing my job. Their daughter (22 aged) is taking interest in me. But i can't tell her , that there's no future with me. We often stay in hotels, where we go. One night we were staying at near forest , on the Requisition of the family boy . The night was too long , and the family was not in mode of sleeping , and they asked me for telling them a story from my life ,and career.
So i was enjoying that coolest day of my life . That sunset and it's beauty , i remember till now. With a smoke of cigar , having some roasted chicken . I took a leg piece , and opened cock of bottle . Suddenly i saw oval shape three things, which was coming down fast from the sky . In one second i thought that it is blasted star. But when the first thing ,was landed in water nearest by me. I was scared ,because it was not any piece of the star and it was beautiful in color , but very scary.
"So what was that?" Asked by the girl (who was with family) "I was a travel guide , not a brave police officer, i ran faster , and never saw back, at last i reached my car" I replied to her.
TO BE CONTINUED
When i started writing the story , i never thought it is very adventist. Now i will must write this story in Urdu language
How was the story Give me your feedback please.
Hi @abdt
I liked your story, it's great
Looking forward to the continuation
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Thank you very much sir..
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Hola @abdt. me pareció muy interesante e intrigante tu historia. quizas al traducirla al español pierde un poco la dramática, pero es solo por el cambio de idioma. espero la segunda parte pronto.
Sigue asi mi amigo
Hasta la próxima...
Very thank you friend, I am glad you liked it. I will write 2nd part more bigger. Cheers!